My whole idea is based on a super-futuristic version of Kirby Air Ride, where the Kirby universe crosses into Chobits, Card Captor Sakura, and Ah! My Goddess. Everyone from Chii to Sakura to Belldandy decide to join the race for galactic glory, and all the battles against evil, wacky misadventures, and delicious dinners on the way.

Expect things like Kirbies with quirky personalities, Gan-chan somehow ending up in a tutu, Chii handing Dragonfly's ass to him on the racetrack, Freya returning, artificial intelligence, obscure references, and Belldandy breaking Mach 4 propelled by nothing but enchanted (blessed?) winged bracelets and anklets.

Oh yeah, and a heckling Urd.

My story takes a more serious line (but Nyala shoots some jokes around).

But when Belldandy fans see what is the bad thing that Nyala did to Belldandy, they WILL kill me, I know.

That "bad thing" is something how can i say... heartbreaking for Belldandy is just the minimal of the things.

Well, anyway, is that story contained somewhere? May I see it?

As for Belldandy abuse...well, there's one encounter with pirates...actually two, one of them, the poor goddess is used as live bait for a sea monster.

This series I have in mind is largely episodic, with only the racing events providing a timeline. And Bell-chan gets her fair share of licks in, mostly on-track. Holy lights aimed at another racer...their vehicle just ceases to be.

Interesting.
Well, I can send the story pdf if you want to read.

Cool. Send it whenever you like.

I will say, however, that the story I'm cobbling together is still just ideas right now. I'm readying the first parts, though...

It is with ideas that you start building the story. I recommand that you write them to not ever forget them. I use that formula and it works perfectly with me.

Send via email right?

Ah, and the first chapters (1-8 if I'm not wrong) are in my old draft writting style, so it may look a bit bad in compasion with the newer version that the chapters 9 and 10 are in.

You mean my real e-mail as opposed to private messaging? Right. And don't worry, I do record the ideas I make.

Using PM with a 100 pages story isn't a very good idea you know...

...ouch. Point taken. Regardless, send away.

And not to mention that the story has 70 chapters planned (with 10 pages per chapter) that will sun up 700 pages, but that only in draft mode...

Got it! I appreciate you sending it out. Thanks.

Hope you like it.

yea i totally agree.... she shld be preserve....

hi! new member! but i totally agree with the topic!!

Well I don't care if someone makes Hentai pics of Belldandy and the gang as long as I don't see them.