how many hikus can you write about belldandy? here i'll share one..

one with life by:angelfeathers
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life has passed her by
as the wind blows the flowers
they say i love you

she sings life is here
life will never dispare
life shall stay life stay

here in the forest
is the angel belldandy
she is one with life

the end
(remember hikus are 5'7'5)

wow, that's nice.

nice poetry.

well...I have a poem myself about Belldandy it goes like this....

REMEMBER MY BELLDANDY

Remember a lady who always smiles
Whenever she's happy or even sad
She speaks of wisdom upright and straight
Being simple her virtue and daring at times

Remember a Goddess who fullfills thy wish
In anyway, anyhow, come what may
Surely be granted regardless of the fact
That she could be wished to stay evermore

Remember a sister who supports all the way
Neverthless of reason she'll always comfort
She'll be there to boost, to cheer thy up
If ever your dark days have blur you up

So do you know this girl who's pretty and kind
Her name is enchanted w/ uniqueness and life
She has the voice of a mermaid and a body of fairy
The blue eyes of tranquility are hers beyond

Oh please tell me if you know where she is
I'll wait for her even if it takes eternity
Please tell the girl I love her so much
TELL BELLDANDY ITS NOT TOO LATE FOR US

-Ashenvale

i hope you'll like it! i just made it lately for this topic..hehehe:)
its dedicated to those guys who longs for belldandy :)
(i think its for boys who loves belldandy coz there's "I love her so much" there...)

Yeah, apparently. But it is a rather nice poem, Ashenvale-san. Really nice. And those haiku's are pretty wonderful aswel. I'm not exactly good at writing poetry and stuff, so I'm not even going to give it a try. :) But you're pretty good.

Nice poem u have there :)

ugh i really wish i could write poems :P but i guess thats a field i cant do anything in lol...

What a nice poem. Guess its dedicated for the boys who know and loved her.

wah....i suck at poems so i dont think i can write them..btu all the poems are nice

Yeah.. i hate making poems but i just don't know why sometimes i make poems like that..:sheep:

When I'm asked to write a poem..nothing comes on my mind but when i make a poem unasked, not pressured to do it.... i apparently compose a beuatiful one that i can't believe i was the one who wrote it! :sheep::)

Remember My Belldandy is just a on-the-spot poem I made. So i guess this is where i wrote it for the 1st time :)

(i'm really not into poems:sheep:)

try making one for bell-chan, but got so fed up that i juz stopped :)
Guess that i should be more patient.....

lol Ashenvale your poem was pretty good actually. my porblem is that i dont know where to start :P

I just read your poem today, and all I can say is. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! Keep it up! And to all you guys, listen, poetry is by no means easy, but if a particular subject inspires you enough to even try to write poetry , "THEN GO WITH YOUR HEART'S FLOW"

... i can't make any poems for belldandy...
because there will never be a poem beautifuler than the goddess belldandy... but i am trying to make a poem for belldandy...

There's nothing as hard as trying to make a poem. Seriously. To me, it's impossible. A poem has to suddenly burst through your mind, run through your veines like cold fire until it hits you in the heart with full force. That's why poems and such don't need any judgement. If you think that your poem is the best ever, then it's true. If someone else thinks it sucks, then that's true aswel. I love the subjectiveness of things. :)