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What you think of my love poem?

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Dart
Dart
I like white or asian girls and I dont mind if you want to help.
19-Mar-2005
Keiichi-K1
Keiichi-K1
^^' well i was more like asking you what personality type of girl ur interested in. ^^' but daijoubou!
19-Mar-2005
Dart
Dart
Oh ok
I like funny, kind, nice kinda of girl
20-Mar-2005
Keiichi-K1
Keiichi-K1
my type of girl is the Belldandy type! now theres a surprise! LOL ^^'
20-Mar-2005
Dart
Dart
now that is a suprise, but is going to be hard to find someone like that
20-Mar-2005
Keiichi-K1
Keiichi-K1
i know, but im sure i'll find her if i look hard enough! ganbatte!
20-Mar-2005
Dart
Dart
Yea if you look hard enough and here is another one of my poems that I made today. I made five today. I call it "Broken Heart"

My heart was crushed,
By my first crush.
I felt no pain,
When she said no.
The next day,
The pain starts to kick in.
I never felt so sad,
In my whole entire life.
So much depression,
Has built up within me.
Nothing matter to me,
much any more.
There is no light,
within me to go to.
She was my inspreation,
Now I have none.
She means everything to me.
Now there nothing left to go on,
But to be a mindless fool.
20-Mar-2005
kitori
kitori
Dart is that how you feel? If i affended you, you don't have to answer ^-^ But your poetry has the theme of love and stolen love.
24-Mar-2005
Dart
Dart
I dont really care what anyone ask me, nothing really affends me and mainly my poems comes from my feelings. It ummm...lets just say that it helps me look deeper into my feelings.
25-Mar-2005
kitori
kitori
That is smart thinking Dart ^-^ Don't throw it any of your poetry, you should keep them in a journal for yourself, these are precious records of your feelings. Thats what i do with my poetry ^-^ Its all nice and safe in a journal for my eyes only, unless i decide to share ^-^ such as one of my personal favourites 'White Womb' because that poem was wrtten durring a moment of pure inspiration with uninturrupted thoughts. So i kept it the way it was.

Keep your paper fresh and your pen ready ^-^ you never know when you might reach a little moment of enlightenment in poetry ^-^
25-Mar-2005
Dart
Dart
I dont really keep my poetry. I just post it online because no matter what I do my poems would never be safe for my eyes only and I dont really care if someone reads my poems except for anyone who is related to me and thats all that matters
26-Mar-2005
kitori
kitori
As long as your poetry is safe ^-^ I believe that when you write down your feelings on paper it is a part of you and should be respected and taken care of ^-^ I love poetry so much, it is such a beautiful way to express ones self. the roling motion of words and the way the peirce your soul so deeply, when a good poem is written its like a fog of emotional aura surrounds you and leaves you struck for a pressiouce single moment to move you and who ever may read it.

Im sorry Im getting carried away ^-^
26-Mar-2005
Dart
Dart
The only safe spot for my poems are here and another place. You just made a poem and I really really like it

"I love poetry so much,
It is such a beautiful way
To express ones self.
The rolling motion of words
The way the peirce your soul so deeply,
When a good poem is written
Its like a fog of emotional
Aura surrounds you
And leaves you
Struck for a pressiouce single moment
To move you
And who ever may read it."
26-Mar-2005
kitori
kitori
Hey look at that ^-^ I guess i did! Off coarse you disserve credit for inspiring me to say that ^-^
26-Mar-2005
Dart
Dart
Yea I do disserve some credit and you disserve credit too so we both got credit hehe
26-Mar-2005