I call it "I have a monster crush on you" I hope it is not crapy and stuff. There also is a why I wrote it, but I dont want to talk about it, but my profile tells little about it except for anything about the poem. It is heartbreaking to me

I have a monster crush on you,
Yet I’m too shy to tell you that I love you.
Everyday I think of you, day and night.
I try to call you to hear your sweet soft voice,
But I’m too nervous to talk to you.
We pass by each other everyday at school,
Yet I don’t know why I won’t talk to you.
When I see you, you make my world shine.
You are the light of my life, my inspiration.
I don’t expect you soon to love me,
Nor are my own feelings clear.
There is nothing more I want than you, And to love you with all my heart.

this is trully exeptinal work
you shoud be quite proud of youself

yes a very nice poem indeed. Please share more of your work in the future.

I will intend to if some more people would really comment me more and when I'm still not heartbroken.

you seem to really want to express your feelings to this person, pretty much the whole poem says that. i think its very beautiful! no changes are necessary if what on the poem is truly in your heart then its flawless!

Ganbatte with that special someone Dart!

You should read my profile it tells another part. ._.

The other part is pretty depressing. Dont get me wrong I like depressing and all its just that I hope you are okay

I'm ok. I'm just more depressed than before, maybe the most depressing moment in my life. I dont know how to describe it, but it really hurts. :(

Im sorry to hear that Dart...I know right now you probably dont want to hear this, but things will get better, I promise you that.

If you ever need to talk my Aim name is xxcichlisuitexx

Thats ok I dont mind at all. I have nothing to lose right now. That was the day everything started to mean nothin to me. I can still remember the words she said to me.

you will meet someone better than her and one that will love u back as well, ganbatte!

Yes -K1 speaks the truth! Dont ever give up

Well... I know sometimes love brings pain... but that happens to almost everyone...

things will get better as time passes... I agree with K1 and Diazo that one day love will bring you happiness again...^^

try to smile...^^

Thanks guys and gurls. you help me feel better a little bit :)

only "better a little bit"? well well well that's not good enough! we all have to try harder to cheer u up more! ^^

wat type of girl do u like? want me to help look for u? ^^
Like im one to talk, i have enough trouble looking for my special someone as it is! ^^'

Pretty soon it'll be ur turn to cheer me up! LOL