I'm in the process of writeing a song about Belldandy.I really don't have much of it done cuz I started a few days ago.So any help with the lyrics would be VERY helpful.:D ^_^

why dont u show us what u have so far ^-^ so we can get ideas where you are going with this goku ^_^

Well I did write a few but I didn't like them so I trashed them.I'ma haven trouble so thats why I'm askn my fellow members to help me:emb: :sheep:

how about...

"Oh My Beloved Belldandy, where have you gone"

^_^

Ask K-1..he's really good at this ~_^

lol yeah! K1 would know what to do! lets see, hmmm...where's the rhyming dictionary when you need it!

In the moonlight
of the night
i see her shinning glimmering light
her eyes like stars a lovely sight
her wings open up and take flight
oh i wish i could hold her tight

lol! there we go a poem written in 3 seconds flat, BAM!

it's real hard to write lyrics if you havent heard the music of the song.

maybe we can do a cover of an existing song! ^^

I thought about thatbut I havent found the music that I think is good enuf for her.Alot of ppl writes lyrics before they write music.I know thats how my lil cuzn does it.

Im not good at coming up with writing anything!!! Not even music...
But writing the lyrics first might just work...

I have that trouble too.Thats why Im askn you alls help.And Im askn some ppl that I know to help me.

I once made up a song... ^_^ I don't think it's all that good, but I'll post it here...it might help. It's on a pretty depressing tune... ah well.

Through all that's happened,
we both were wrong.
We destroyed eachother,
our hearts were torn.
Following the light,
we grew apart.
But listen and hear
the song of my heart.

When my eyes stop crying,
my heart's born anew
I will still remember
when I loved you.
I have lost so much,
broke my dreams.
Yet I still can see,
what you meant to me.

Standing in the darkness,
hope seemed so far.
Struggling and fighting,
and not getting far.
But I can't stay,
in a past so far away.
You have my trust,
though our love is now lost.

And when my eyes stop crying,
my heart's born anew
I will still remember
when I loved you.
I have lost so much,
broke my dreams.
Yet I still can see,
what you meant to me.

And when my eyes stop crying,
my heart's born anew
I will still remember
when I loved you.
I have lost so much,
broke my dreams.
Yet I still can see,
what you meant to me.

Yes, I still can see
what you mean to me.

I came up with the lyrics first, and then, while reading them, I came up with a tune.

I hope it helps.

I think that is quite good Rie.It's alot better than anything I can come up with lol.The song kinda reminded me of what I felt like after me & my 1st gf broke up:cry: .

Heh, sorry if it brought back painful memories. And thank you, I'm honored that you think so. ^-^

wow thats really good. i'd love to hear that being sung ^_^ to write music its best to write a poem and once its done you can then think of the tune to go with it. well thats what my friend told me and she's got a voice of an angel i swear. its a shame i don't have any recordings of her singing

Woah!!!!! Yuka!! *sniffles* thats soo nice....

I wish I was that good at writing songs and poems....
maybe I just dont have the feelings to write.....

in composing lyrics...just remember to rhyme the last words in a line...but thats optional...you can compose it by using freestyle...:E