That's the entire point of writing: making your feelings come out in words. It's very hard, I think, but if you can do it, it's a great talent.

There's no one else,
There's no one else,
That touched my heart,
The way you do,
I see your face, you fill my heart
Oh can yoouuuu, feel it too?

(etc etc cant think of this bit yet!)

Chorus:

And every dayyyyyy, and each day, i love you!
For each dayyyy, and each dayyyy, you get me through!
I find that i love you more each passing dayyyy! ooh ooh!
From now until foreverrr!

( i know its kinda rusty, but can ya blame me? its my first time writing lyrics!)

...not bad for a starter!:E

Rei your song was very beautiful ^-^ I was very touched by it, and K1 yours was very cute ^-^ Not bad for a Belldandy lover !

Oh sing your song my lovely one,
as my hope is soon restored.
As feathers fly, through the sky.
I know that i am safe.
As long as i have your love.

Ok stupid i know but maybe it will help?

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Originally posted by Reiyuka (view)
I once made up a song... ^_^ I don't think it's all that good, but I'll post it here...it might help. It's on a pretty depressing tune... ah well.

Through all that's happened,
we both were wrong.
We destroyed eachother,
our hearts were torn.
Following the light,
we grew apart.
But listen and hear
the song of my heart.

When my eyes stop crying,
my heart's born anew
I will still remember
when I loved you.
I have lost so much,
broke my dreams.
Yet I still can see,
what you meant to me.

Standing in the darkness,
hope seemed so far.
Struggling and fighting,
and not getting far.
But I can't stay,
in a past so far away.
You have my trust,
though our love is now lost.

And when my eyes stop crying,
my heart's born anew
I will still remember
when I loved you.
I have lost so much,
broke my dreams.
Yet I still can see,
what you meant to me.

And when my eyes stop crying,
my heart's born anew
I will still remember
when I loved you.
I have lost so much,
broke my dreams.
Yet I still can see,
what you meant to me.

Yes, I still can see
what you mean to me.

I came up with the lyrics first, and then, while reading them, I came up with a tune.

I hope it helps.

can i use this lyrics for my composition?

Keiichiroy, That Sounds Nice! Good One!

Tis the darkest glyphs in my heart,
It sacrificed my stray soul,
Since when did I became like this?
My life torn asunder,
Shattered into pieces,
As if time was not pitying me one bit,
I was alone...

In the depths of time,
The cogs of fate turned,
A small ray of light shone,
Warm...calming light,
It was as if time stopped,
My once dead and black heart,
Resurrected.

Shall I call thee as my angel?
My saviour,
You held out your hand willingly,
With an unresistable smile,
Azure blue eyes,
Hair radiant as a summer's day,
I grasped thy hand...Bell.


:love:

this thread is so great...

Yeah it rocks!^^