I like poetry, it likes express your feelings. Why dont we all post at least one poem on here "of our own?" I can't because I have extremly depressing or sad poems sometimes love, but not much. If you want to see it just tell and I will do it.

I would like to read some more, but if you dont feel comfortable posting it, email it to me

xxcichlisuitexx@netscape.net

my poerty is my music...when Im finished with the track im working on Ill post a link to it

This poem is kinda crappy to me so here it goes. ^^

"LOVE"

I love Joy
I love Lisa
I love Vimi
And some more
But not the I love Ashley
She was different
From the others
My heart was crushed by her
But I still love
My heart is in pain
Because I can't let her go
The only way to cure this pain
If I or someone else find someone for me
Or she finds me
That I would love
The same way I love Ashley

Hey that was pretty good ^-^ I myself am lover of poetry ^-^
Here is one of my own poems that I am fairly fond of:

WHITE WOMB
An Angel
drops from the sky
falls to the ground
on holy knees
An angel-
dies today
A grave of rain
on a bed of rubble
Ashes and sand
A holey angel
soft pillar of light
clings to gods womb
barried on Earth
Giving birth
the womb of the womb
to the garden of Edan
Reincarnated-
As Adam and Eve
To join in desire
love and sin
thus birthing man

i wrote it a year ago and find it powerful, i use it to enspire me everyday ^-^ Thank you for brining up such a beautiful topic, please share some more of ur poetry

Thanks kitori :)
Your poem is very inspriering (hope I spell that right hehe)
I wrote mine like around this month, mainly the week before.
It is a pleasure to bring this topic up, I like poetry too. (I just like to say that again:))
This one is called "BLAKE"

My name is Doug
My name is Blake
Whats the difference?
I will tell you
Doug is kind, nice, caring, and soft
Blake is evil, rude, heartless, and hard
The only thing they have in common
Is they both are mainly queit
Blake is being held back so much
From doing harmful things
By the kindness of Doug.
Blake comes from Doug
His sadness, his anger, his depression, and more.
Blake will be released
Its just a matter of time
Before he starts doing harm
Doug needs Blake to go on
There is a way to stop
Blake from coming out
But I can't tell you
Because Doug needs Blake now

Wow those are very nice you 2.But I think we're supose to put our poetry in the Chronicles.

Aw their just samples of our work ^-^! But i didn't know their was a poetry section in the choricles, pray tell ^-^
Your poem was very good, i really like the idea in it, I may of taken it wrong but i saw it as a person struggaling with their inner feelings, emotions catagorised as blake and douge, and the only way to stay stable is to keep both parts of the personality. that was fascinating ^-^ I really enjoyed it

^^ i really like poetry... actually, i posted my favorite poem on BAF... here! ^^
http://www.angel-feathers.com/chronicles.php?action=loadarticle&aid=54
lol! ^^ don't worry, i put a tranclation right under the original version...

Wow I didn't notice that, hehe. ok than I'm going to try to post all my poems there. :)

I liked your poem Morphee.I read it awhile back when I put my poems in.I really like all of'em.:) :bg:

I like poetry too!!! I didn't know that you could post it here! Neat ^_^! Has anyone read "Spoon River Anthology" I think it is one of the best example of free-verse poetry out there!

The peotry written by everyone in the chronicles section are really wonderful ^-^ and I would like to tell people that, however is there a way to review a poem or story, or any article for that matter besides email?

I like everyones poem that are all great

Here's a poem i wrote for the my lovely Belldandy:

Oh my lovely Belldandy, how I love you so
You are my sky, you are my sun,
You are the shining moon when the day is done,

You are the goddess, of my life,
One who is behind me, in my strife,

Helping me through, each single day,
As you take, my cares away,

Oh to kiss your tender lips,
To feel your slender hips,

To hold your soft warm hands,
The kindest in all the lands,
For that I will do anything,

Oh to be with you, in wedded bliss,
Or even just, a simple kiss,

I think of you, each day and night,
Where there is darkness, you bring me light,

I see your graceful form,
Please my beating heart be still,
In other words Belldandy,
I love you, and I always will.


[shoots fireworks into the air to form the letters "I LOVE BELLDANDY!"]

*clapping* Nice very Nice