well with the stories i'm doing at the moment, the only bit of advice i can give is think out various scenes as you're doing it. have a look at the scene from various angles to see if you can improve on it in any way. i'm doing a self insert series called "let it burn" the first story is on mediaminer.org called "Symphony of Destruction" it's not for kiddies either. it's got violence, sex, death, blood, action and a little alchemy thrown in as well. the version on mm.org is the earlier version, i'm currently working on the sequel and making a directors cut of Symphony of destruction. so as i was saying before, make the story first, then go back and see if there's anything you can improve on before you upload it. thats all the advice i can give at the moment, i'm sorry
03-Apr-2006